Puff Of Smoke Poems

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1. Mary Kendall | August 11, 2015 at 1:26 pm

   Have you ever done haiku outside the box? I think you’d love some of the choices. I liked both of these, but the second one struck me as just perfect…I love that image of dividing the season into two green halves. Perfect!

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   • puffofsmokepoems | August 13, 2015 at 1:15 pm

     Haiku outside the box? Is that a thing? I don’t know about that. But thanks for taking time to read and comment–

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     • Mary Kendall | August 13, 2015 at 3:05 pm

       Ha ha, I meant not in a 5-7-5 pattern.